Snow clouds over the mountains and new beginnings

I managed to slip out for a walk earlier this week just before it snowed–with the snow clouds hanging low over the mountains. It was amazingly beautiful. This is my second winter in Colorado. Winters here are pretty great–especially compared to winters in Chicago.

snow clouds
from a different snowy day

And those snow clouds inspired three haiku. I also wrote this haiku about snow last winter. Appreciating the beauty of nature seems a good way to welcome 2021. I found myself feeling sad as 2020 slipped into 2021 last night. I watched on TV as the ball dropped in Times Square. Last New Year’s Eve, I’d been in NYC–not Times Square, though!–but spending a lovely evening with my daughter, Gabi, who lives there, her boyfriend, and her dear friend Leela. Last year, as we crossed over into the New Year, we were dancing in her kitchen in the Bronx. Last night, I was missing her and also my dad, who passed away from Covid complications in October. Somehow, leaving 2020 behind felt like leaving him behind, too.

Snow clouds–new beginnings

There’s nothing like snow to make everything seem clean and new. The world looks different when coated with that white powder. It smells different, too. I love watching the snowfall. I find it quite soothing (as long as I don’t have to drive in it). Even though the snow fell a few days before New Year’s here, it still feels like a good place to focus.

I wanted to photograph the mountains, but I only had my phone with me, and I knew my camera couldn’t capture what I saw, so I just looked and breathed the fresh air as night fell. And wrote poems–which made me happy.

white mountain and white snow clouds
Photo by Š’Š»Š°Š“ŠøŠ¼Šøр ŠšŠ¾Š½Š“рŠ°Ń‚ŃŒŠµŠ² on Pexels.com

3 haiku about snow clouds

I.
 Whipped cream clouds surround
  scoops of Rocky mountain ice cream.
  Where are the cherries?

II.
Moon's face peers unblinking
Through filmy sheer cloud curtains
Who do you wait for?

III.
Mountain peaks poke up
Like knees from a bubble bath
through snow-scented clouds.

Happy 2021–and happy Poetry Friday

Thanks to Ruth for hosting Poetry Friday this week. Ruth celebrates the New Year–and Haitian Independence day–with poems and food and shares what other poets are thinking about as this new year begins.

Thank you so much for stopping by. I wish you a happy and healthy new year–and much love!

xoxo

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13 Comments

  1. Thanks for the lovely haiku, Susan!

    1. Thank you, Ruth!

      1. Ruth have poetic dna who easily arrange his sight seeing into usefull verse of poems. Quite amazing !

    2. Hi, Susan! its pretty to illustrate your’s all the three haikus, & daddy passes away were quite disappointed all of us.

  2. Terrific imagery, Susan. I love the questions of the first two, but the third one might be my favorite.
    Thanks for sharing your poems and thoughts with us. I’m sorry, again, about your dad’s passing.

    1. Thanks for your kind word about my poems and my dad, Tabatha. I think the third was my favorite of these 3, also.

  3. Susan – so stunning. I wished to be there in Co seeing what you see – and appreciate that you captured with your mind what you felt the phone would do insufficently. I am most drawn by the smell of snow – oh that image of mountain knees in snow-scented bubble bath! I come away feeling like I’ve had a deep, fresh lungfuls of snow-cleansed air. Loved every bit. I know the pain of moving into a new year and having to leave loved ones behind in the old…time is marked by so many hard milesposts. I wish you strength of spirit and new words coming to you on the snow clouds and beyond. And blessings.

    1. Thank you so much, Fran. Your words are like a breath of fresh mountain air! Wishing you the best in this new year.

  4. I like that voice coming through in your second haiku, “who do you wait for” such mystery thereā€¦ That photo is incredible and humbling, the mountains so majestic and foreboding at the same time. I like the top one too. Happy New Year Susan!

    1. Happy new year, Michelle. And thanks!

  5. Delightful. I think the Rocky Mountain ice cream should have cherries! Your haiku from two weeks ago sparked my post for last week. Keep haiku-ing, please! It is such an emotional time for those of us that hold a lot of feelings. Be well, press on. We got this!

    1. Thanks, Linda. I can use an online cheerleader like you! I’m glad that my haiku inspired you. I’ve gotten so much support and inspiration from Poetry Friday!

  6. I’m laughing about “Where are the cherries?” The image of the mountains’ knees sticking through a bubble bath of snow will stick with me. It’s so inventive!

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